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I'm OVERFLOWING with joy after this ;) awesome but there's always room from improvement heeheh

Duudeee you're getting better!!! this is so fuckin dopeeee ^^ the last drop at around 3:00 motivated me so mucchhh! I wasn't expecting that kick-ass drop ahahah
I love the lil voices in 2:30 and the sad melody at the beginning is great too.
Keep it up man, keep making music!

As for advice, I'm not saying it's a bad thing necesarily, but it has very different and oposite emotions, so that makes it kinda hard to listen to, cuz I think some people want to listen to sad music and I personally like motivating music, so if you mix the too you "scare off" both. For example, I'd put this in my playlist if it didnt have the sad part. but I replayed the drop like 3 times heheh. cya :^)

Steve28 responds:

Hehe....Thanks, Comments like this really motivates me to keep making music.

And personally, I like the songs that has multiple styles in it, which could also be the multiple genres. So...Yeah, I think I'll keep my song's styles like this.

Yoo it's soo good! :D Just checked your new stuff and I like this a lot. Very chill... it's good to see you're trying different styles

Steve28 responds:

Long time no see, pere! Thanks :)

This is awesome! It reminds me a lot of Sonic 3 music, especially Ice Cap Zone theme

Fretzone responds:

Man you are so right haha i didnt notice but i just listened to it and its true haha. I played a lot of sonic 2 and 3 when i was young so it might stuck with me all those years :) Thanks for listening to it and i'm glad you liked it :)

Sounds great, especially the drop (about 2:40 to 3:00).
I'm not good at composing at all but I think at 3:05 a powerful "bassy" percussion base and maybe some other "drop sounds" or effects would make it much more awesome. I don't know what rhythms you should make or what exactly you should change but I just think that part felt a bit empty. Also I think it's the instument, that seems a bit "lonely" or too simple. I think that effects and distortions (used wisely) would help too.

I also love the "transition" from 0:27 to 0:31.

Remember I suck at music, this is just what I felt :)

Steve28 responds:

Wow...thanks for detailed feedback, and...yeah, I also felt some 'empty's at the drops.
So I tried some things, like add some choirs or change drum patterns, but It was not fit in the song. so I just uploaded like this. I'll try your words in my next song, Thanks anyway! :D

I'm a game developer and artist. There's not much of my work out there but I'll start uploading art soon, and more games! Stay tuned for that!!!

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